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Sonne · 03-16-2009, 05:06 PM

Aww how sweet!

Sonne · 03-21-2009, 10:31 AM

A little something I wrote yesterday...

"We are animals"

We are all animals that forgot to be it
We have been taken over by
The ignorant, superficial and mean specie called human
But if you look deep down inside you will see
There´s still a pure part of our own
If we search for the truth inside
We will find our most simple part of life
And I won´t dare to lose it again
One day I woke up with all these questions
Flying right through my head
And decided to give them an answer
Just watching inside and now I know
There´s an afterlife
I believe in Karma and that if you do good
You will receive the same in return
The same as if you would act wrong and you know the end

greenpoet · 03-23-2009, 03:30 AM

Hi Sonne, Ummm... I think , its the other way around. Humans are people with soul and heart its innate for them to choose whether to be good or evil but to chose evil is to become like animals. The first three lines, I don't agree but the rest, its law of cause and effect called universal law, I most agree.

*
Below is a poem I wrote about love (umm..) but on a different kind of beat.

LOVE IS...

Love is like a beast
You can smell its fur
But you can't seemed to see its face
It hides and wanders off
Untamed as it is, beautiful in its
own primitive nature.
*
Cruetly for us but not for him.
Clutches its prey and devours the flesh
Then sleeps for the night to rest
Then haunts again for a smell of a new blood.
*
Prying the next victim
Looking silently, crawling
Gathering its animal strength
Nothing can't stop a hungry beast.
*
Is it not love , I say
But a lust behind its instinct.
And love will not live
It is going to be extinct.

Sonne · 03-24-2009, 12:03 PM

I just meant the true... For me turn into evil is being a real human being (from this consumism society). I don´t see a relation between evil and animal. The evil has been teach to us within this way to live. Do you know what I mean?
We would have been lived better if we would have maintain our roots and not dying for ambition as this society has made us feel is the only way to live. I know there´s another way and just thinking that is have get the half of it

It´s just my opinion!

Now that I read your peom I see that you are saying the same in some way.
Love is natural and act through instincts :P That´s our most pure connection with natural ans animals are natural as well

Take care

Little Bird · 03-24-2009, 12:54 PM

I'm sorry I haven't been able to offer an opinion lately. I've been spread quite thinnly and have had to prioritise what I get to check and read. I hope to get some time to check these later and let you know but I suspect already that I'll like them!

Sonne · 04-25-2009, 01:49 PM

World turning

*I wanna close my eyes
And stop the world from turning*

Stop the entire universe
Just for a little while
Make the happy times last forever
And the sad ones end

*Chorus

To can believe in better times
To can think we can make it
Have anytime our lover beside
To dance and think that´s it!
That´s exactly what we achieved

*Chorus

I don´t already hope for shiny days
And I guess this is for living too long
So many times passed through my fingers
I don´t wanna live another day blind

*Chorus

How many times have we thought…
This is the worsest part of my life?
We feel us ready for many things
But never ready for what we have to face
So I only wait for a blackout too

*Chorus

greenpoet · 04-27-2009, 04:43 AM

BANG! BANG!
How sad it is
to be in the black hole forever.
*
But why would you loosen your grip to reality
Since, natural sentiments, lessen over time
Tis' a reason for hope.
*
Yes,one hope alone, a balm for open wounds
It will heal you forever...
To become whole again.

TALKING ABOUT YOU

Let's talk about it
Don't give up your tenderness
You may hide it for awhile
But don't keep it forever.
*
The most beautiful melody
Comes from the scarred heart
Time approaches infinity
And when it does
you will taste eternity
*
Believe that there is life waiting for you
After the love has gone wrong
Don't give up hope
coz' love stays with you.
*
It happens for a reason
It always stays inside your heart
Longing, finding until it is free
to love again...

Sonne · 05-08-2009, 02:49 PM

Nice one!

Sonne · 05-19-2009, 11:54 AM

Thank you for following these pieces of me!

Take care

greenpoet · 06-01-2009, 11:45 AM

Its been awhile since my last reading and posting. Take care too.

Sonne · 06-13-2009, 01:50 PM

Hi
It´s been a long time...

One of the reason that maybe the verse doesn´t fit as you think they should is that I write in spanish and translate it for you

Enjoy!

Five years

It´s been five years already, sweetheart
I remind your smile on the sun still
The shower falling upon you
Making your dress a part of you

*It´s been five years trying to make you live
Through memories and pictures
I remind how you took me into your arms still
Your lips so soft as a peach
Who knows what are you doing right now
Are you here ot there, on or off?*

I try to occupy my mind with anything
Because everytime I stand still thinking of you
Is another day trying to reach you faster
Nothing here really import me at all
My life?... a space filled with a job I hate
Friends? That never are there when I need them
Family? Only worry about fights and Money
No, these five years without you wasn´t life at all
Everybody seem to have overcome the loss of you
But I´m not as strong as you have ever thought, no… I´m not

*Chorus

I just want to hold you again
Caress the happiness and smile by a joke
But damn it! I´m a dead alive
My life is a dark hole that everyone fill with

Loneliness it´s eating it all
My body
My heart
My soul
My everything…

Sonne · 06-23-2009, 12:36 PM

Soul to the wind

*My soul belong to the wind
And only he can darken it to me
My eyes belong to the sea
And only he can fill them to me
This body I own is judge
By everyone who look at me
But only I got the power on my lips*

The day I will go away
Everybody will weep
But earth will drink just the sincere tears
It´s short the time to live
But lengthy the one to destroy
I don´t already expect a dream come true
The only thing I wanted was to see a smile on your lips
But many times what´s seem easy
It´s to thousand billion miles kilometre away

*Chorus

I wake up to realice how my heart burns
By keep on seeing people with a lot of hatred within
I would like to open my eyes and can laugh
And one more time I say…

*Chorus

Children are filled with hopes and distant horizons
Just like us when we had their age… Do you remind?
Now that you received a thousand of wounds
That don´t finish to heal you feel yourself fed up crying
But… Would you be able to murder their dreams by your frustration?

*Let children dream and fly
Let them as long as they are children*1

*Chorus
*Chorus 1

Hope you like it

Take care

Little Bird · 06-23-2009, 10:55 PM

Just wanted to let you know that I always enjoy reading your work!

Sonne · 06-26-2009, 02:57 PM

Aww thank you so much, little bird!

Sonne · 07-02-2009, 09:56 AM

A special song for a special man!

What I feel for you

In this I love you I join heaven and earth
Fire and sea, mountain and breezes
Clouds and sand, sun and moon
Flowers and love to show how simple it is
To tell you I love you from the heart

03-23-2009, 03:30 AM	#48
greenpoet Amused by the Muse Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 147 Rep Power: 214	Hi Sonne, Ummm... I think , its the other way around. Humans are people with soul and heart its innate for them to choose whether to be good or evil but to chose evil is to become like animals. The first three lines, I don't agree but the rest, its law of cause and effect called universal law, I most agree. * Below is a poem I wrote about love (umm..) but on a different kind of beat. LOVE IS... Love is like a beast You can smell its fur But you can't seemed to see its face It hides and wanders off Untamed as it is, beautiful in its own primitive nature. * Cruetly for us but not for him. Clutches its prey and devours the flesh Then sleeps for the night to rest Then haunts again for a smell of a new blood. * Prying the next victim Looking silently, crawling Gathering its animal strength Nothing can't stop a hungry beast. * Is it not love , I say But a lust behind its instinct. And love will not live It is going to be extinct. __________________ "And if you see my words like stone Know its wisdom lies in silence And if you see my wisdom in silence Then with you, I will always be." Last edited by greenpoet; 03-23-2009 at 03:42 AM.

03-24-2009, 12:54 PM	#50
Little Bird Administrator Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Wicklow, Ireland Posts: 6,178 Rep Power: 10	I'm sorry I haven't been able to offer an opinion lately. I've been spread quite thinnly and have had to prioritise what I get to check and read. I hope to get some time to check these later and let you know but I suspect already that I'll like them! __________________ In the end...only kindness matters MysteriousWisdom

04-27-2009, 04:43 AM	#52
greenpoet Amused by the Muse Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 147 Rep Power: 214	BANG! BANG! How sad it is to be in the black hole forever. * But why would you loosen your grip to reality Since, natural sentiments, lessen over time Tis' a reason for hope. * Yes,one hope alone, a balm for open wounds It will heal you forever... To become whole again. TALKING ABOUT YOU Let's talk about it Don't give up your tenderness You may hide it for awhile But don't keep it forever. * The most beautiful melody Comes from the scarred heart Time approaches infinity And when it does you will taste eternity * Believe that there is life waiting for you After the love has gone wrong Don't give up hope coz' love stays with you. * It happens for a reason It always stays inside your heart Longing, finding until it is free to love again... __________________ "And if you see my words like stone Know its wisdom lies in silence And if you see my wisdom in silence Then with you, I will always be."

06-01-2009, 11:45 AM	#55
greenpoet Amused by the Muse Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Philippines Posts: 147 Rep Power: 214	Its been awhile since my last reading and posting. Take care too. __________________ "And if you see my words like stone Know its wisdom lies in silence And if you see my wisdom in silence Then with you, I will always be."

06-23-2009, 10:55 PM	#58
Little Bird Administrator Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Wicklow, Ireland Posts: 6,178 Rep Power: 10	Just wanted to let you know that I always enjoy reading your work! __________________ In the end...only kindness matters MysteriousWisdom

03-16-2009, 05:06 PM	#46
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	Aww how sweet!

03-21-2009, 10:31 AM	#47
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	A little something I wrote yesterday... "We are animals" We are all animals that forgot to be it We have been taken over by The ignorant, superficial and mean specie called human But if you look deep down inside you will see There´s still a pure part of our own If we search for the truth inside We will find our most simple part of life And I won´t dare to lose it again One day I woke up with all these questions Flying right through my head And decided to give them an answer Just watching inside and now I know There´s an afterlife I believe in Karma and that if you do good You will receive the same in return The same as if you would act wrong and you know the end

03-24-2009, 12:03 PM	#49
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	I just meant the true... For me turn into evil is being a real human being (from this consumism society). I don´t see a relation between evil and animal. The evil has been teach to us within this way to live. Do you know what I mean? We would have been lived better if we would have maintain our roots and not dying for ambition as this society has made us feel is the only way to live. I know there´s another way and just thinking that is have get the half of it It´s just my opinion! Now that I read your peom I see that you are saying the same in some way. Love is natural and act through instincts :P That´s our most pure connection with natural ans animals are natural as well Take care

04-25-2009, 01:49 PM	#51
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	World turning I wanna close my eyes And stop the world from turning Stop the entire universe Just for a little while Make the happy times last forever And the sad ones end Chorus To can believe in better times To can think we can make it Have anytime our lover beside To dance and think that´s it! That´s exactly what we achieved Chorus I don´t already hope for shiny days And I guess this is for living too long So many times passed through my fingers I don´t wanna live another day blind Chorus How many times have we thought… This is the worsest part of my life? We feel us ready for many things But never ready for what we have to face So I only wait for a blackout too Chorus

05-08-2009, 02:49 PM	#53
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	Nice one!

05-19-2009, 11:54 AM	#54
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	Thank you for following these pieces of me! Take care

06-13-2009, 01:50 PM	#56
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	Hi It´s been a long time... One of the reason that maybe the verse doesn´t fit as you think they should is that I write in spanish and translate it for you Enjoy! Five years It´s been five years already, sweetheart I remind your smile on the sun still The shower falling upon you Making your dress a part of you It´s been five years trying to make you live Through memories and pictures I remind how you took me into your arms still Your lips so soft as a peach Who knows what are you doing right now Are you here ot there, on or off? I try to occupy my mind with anything Because everytime I stand still thinking of you Is another day trying to reach you faster Nothing here really import me at all My life?... a space filled with a job I hate Friends? That never are there when I need them Family? Only worry about fights and Money No, these five years without you wasn´t life at all Everybody seem to have overcome the loss of you But I´m not as strong as you have ever thought, no… I´m not *Chorus I just want to hold you again Caress the happiness and smile by a joke But damn it! I´m a dead alive My life is a dark hole that everyone fill with Loneliness it´s eating it all My body My heart My soul My everything…

06-23-2009, 12:36 PM	#57
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	Soul to the wind My soul belong to the wind And only he can darken it to me My eyes belong to the sea And only he can fill them to me This body I own is judge By everyone who look at me But only I got the power on my lips The day I will go away Everybody will weep But earth will drink just the sincere tears It´s short the time to live But lengthy the one to destroy I don´t already expect a dream come true The only thing I wanted was to see a smile on your lips But many times what´s seem easy It´s to thousand billion miles kilometre away Chorus I wake up to realice how my heart burns By keep on seeing people with a lot of hatred within I would like to open my eyes and can laugh And one more time I say… Chorus Children are filled with hopes and distant horizons Just like us when we had their age… Do you remind? Now that you received a thousand of wounds That don´t finish to heal you feel yourself fed up crying But… Would you be able to murder their dreams by your frustration? Let children dream and fly Let them as long as they are children1 Chorus Chorus 1 Hope you like it Take care

06-26-2009, 02:57 PM	#59
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	Aww thank you so much, little bird!

07-02-2009, 09:56 AM	#60
Sonne Super JKF Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Spain Posts: 376 Rep Power: 0	A special song for a special man! What I feel for you In this I love you I join heaven and earth Fire and sea, mountain and breezes Clouds and sand, sun and moon Flowers and love to show how simple it is To tell you I love you from the heart